Looks good! The only thing im not sure about his is neck length.
Ah yea, someone commented on that earlier today...Unfortunately idk if I can fix that, but I will try!
I spent the last few hours trying some fixes. Lowering the head/hood, altering the collar-bone position etc. But all of the fixed versions made him feel so stumpy. I'm just going to go with what I have, and hope the hood obscures the location of the collar-bone enough so that the length of the neck doesn't jump out to everyone who looks at it.
This was bugging me, so I went back to work on it and came up with what you see here. Hopefully this is a happy medium between the two 'extremes'.
I think it's just the layered clothing that makes it look off. Ballin model dude. Had to make a joke in class or something. Everything is always dead silent when you show your character.